Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree?
It is no exaggeration that there has remained a topic of debate as to whether it is better for older people to continue working or not. While some proponents are convinced in favor of older individuals continuing to work, others hold a contrasting viewpoint. Personally, I completely agree with this idea as this trend has countless benefits not only to companies but also to these old generations.
On the one hand, providing job opportunities to older generations can bring economic benefits to organizations. This is because those who are in their mid-sixties have accrued a great deal of experience, which both helps firms to deal with various issues effectively and efficiently and can enrich younger staff mindset, consequently improving corporations productivity and profitability. For example, a massive majority of owners of law companies say that they prefer to employ well-qualified lawyers who are over 60 years olds, as those professionals have sufficient work experience to help firms to cope with variety of legal problems, making organizations more profitable and productive.
On the other hand, having a job in their later years is beneficial to older people's mental and physical health. The reason is that when having retired from their jobs and staying at home day-to-day, older generations normally are less likely to accept a new lifestyle and even struggle to feel fulfilled and rewarded, which may result in several psychological problems for them. By contrast, if those who have retired are offered an opportunity to continue working in a firm, they are able to make several contributions to organizations and interact with their team members, which has a huge number of benefits to their mental and emotional conditions. For instance, in Japan, a number of news outlets point out that older retirees are suffering from depression, as they are unable to adapt to the change of lifestyle and feel they are less useful.
In conclusion, people may vary in their opinion about whether offering suitable jobs to retired populations is a good situation or not, while I am of the opinion that this is a positive circumstance as it brings several advantages not only to corporations but also to elderly residents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...at there has remained a topic of debate as to whether it is better for older people to contin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20775623269 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07824666826 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567867036011 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.7596242147 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.909090909 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8181818182 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171214778079 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731258597582 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598553204718 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110259820806 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780615166962 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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