ISSUE 156: Claim: No act is done purely for the benefit of others.
Reason: All actions - even those that seem to be done for other people - are based on self interest.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
In our lives, we sometimes experience some chances of benevolence, which may be helpful for others. Some people willingly take the chance to offer others some extent of benefit, while others refuse to do so, or even stigmatize such activity claiming that no act is done purely for the benefit of others. Nevertheless, I disagree with the given claim because I believe that there is some examples of action which is done purely for other people. I disagree with the reason as well, for the same reason.
Admittedly, there are many cases which seems to be done for convenience of others but not actually. Donation done by celebrities or companies would be a compelling example. Donation itself is a very benevolent action, yet it cannot be denied that it is advantageous for their fiscal status. Those donations with a large sum of money are encouraged by government, through allowing them to save their taxes. Construction of good images would be another charm, which may allow dismaying the donation as expenditure for marketing or promotion. Regarding that those subjects are cognizant with their potential advantageous, consequential to their actions, this prominent example definitely demonstrates that some beneficial actions are not solely based on the interest of others.
However, there are some examples of donation which are not aimed for those rewards, yet the number could be not very significant. For example, it is not impossible to read news articles about a celebrity who used to patronize a non-profit benevolent organization over a decade, without telling it to anyone. A story of an old man, who already suffers from poverty, collecting abandoned glass bottles and sheets of paper for living, saving his money for years, and eventually donating it all to other penurious families, is a more significant example, regarding that he does not need any of promotion to the public. These examples of more quotidian donations, which are done very privately and secretly, reveals that some actions ground on sincere empathy for others.
Finally, the given reason asserting that all actions are based on self-interest, will be definitely rebutted by a lofty action: sacrifice. For instance, a Korean college student who was studying abroad in Japan, had saved a man who was accidently fallen on a railroad. This student was soon killed by a train, and he was surely attentive that this action will end up with his sacrifice since the train was approaching so quickly in the vicinity. However, he decided to jump off from the platform without hesitance even for a second. Life is one of the strongest and, most important, and the most innate eager of a person; his sublime action would be an irreproachable proof of an action, which is perfectly unencumbered by self-interest.
In summary, though many so-called benevolent actions would be partially based on the expectation of self-reward, lofty examples including unknown donation or sacrificing one’s life proves that not all actions are so. Thus, people should be optimistic and strive to be altruistic to each other, realizing the virtue in our very society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 374, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some examples'?
Suggestion: there are some examples
... the given claim because I believe that there is some examples of action which is done purely for othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2623.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 509.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15324165029 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87781366315 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536345776031 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 848.7 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5804871044 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.904761905 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2380952381 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395338695947 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123840233887 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874496428537 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219848381234 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105999304298 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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