There is more and more outrage and anger common in society today. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?
It is undoubtedly that current public increasingly having been bad-tempered is usual attitudes. There are several causes of this phenomenon, however, I opine negative development which will be deliberated more below.
Regarding the causes, being angry in public is one of common activities in which to express a sense of disappointing particularly adolescent witnessing transitional time from childhood to adulthood adapt in emotional management. This is influenced by unhealthy environment surrounding caused by frequently inter-adult conflict which could represent teenagers’ character. Furthermore, people underestimate self-esteem an individual by teasing such individual on digital platform. With cyber-bullying, people share hoax information dealing with themselves or their relatives which ending up provoke negative response from netizen becoming the level of fury soaring drastically.
On the flip side, this issue has been obvious me giving several drawbacks that the anger may aggravate body health continuously undergone in long run. It appears that the anger release hormonal stress (adrenalin) inducing hearth beat fast and the increase of blood pressure. A study stated there are three times risk get stroke which cloths blood in brain renowned as aneurysm. In addition, an individual would be loss of career having been earned by him as people feel anxiety when work together with him who is excessive angry. Consequently, such individual will be excluded in social environment and even laid off in workplace considered the decrease of company performance.
In conclusion, the causes of the inappropriate expression of anger amongst today’s society include finding identity in adulthood as well as stepping on self-esteem. Meanwhile, plausible disadvantages are considered worsening health condition and losing the greater career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, may, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9328358209 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19435240386 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694029850746 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4473990059 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152753838736 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462723018405 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690829679697 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943018745009 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538637878972 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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