Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A school of thought holds that news is completely separate from human life, therefore it is not necessary to read newspapers or watch television news programs. I disagree with this notion for the reasons outlined below.
News truly has always been an indispensable part of life for a long time, especially in the era of globalization, it is more important than ever. The news will first help people to expand their understanding. With a newspaper page or a news program, people can be aware of what important events are happening around us, in their country or another faraway country. Additionally, with continuously updated news, people will not be left behind with the general situation of the world. For example, through newspapers and radio, even though people are not in Russia or Ukraine they can still the war situation or negotiations between these two countries or when the iPhone 15 is released, Apple Inc needs to announce news about that release so that consumers around the world know. Thus, it can be said that news is a means for people to become
In addition, if people do not share news and do not update news, a state of isolation will take place everywhere in the world because then people only know about their lives, and there will be no problems. any support, support or even rebuttal. For example, in Vietnam, a few years ago, there was a huge flood in the central provinces. If the media had not reported it at that time, people in other provinces outside that area would not have known the dire situation of the people in the Central region, and of course, there would not have been such timely relief.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that news has an extremely strong connection with human life with the functions mentioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82508250825 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61512787266 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0358860484 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33901424021 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110376193115 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778336959047 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183431756058 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614645597032 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.