You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, it is a common belief that besides pursuing university for academic learning, there should be more encouragement for people to enroll in vocational training due to the lack of qualified laborers such as electricians and plumbers. From my perspective, I partly agree with this statement since despite the importance of qualified workers in society, the role of intellectual classes should not be neglected for some reasons.
On the one hand, qualified workers have contributed their efforts in many aspects. The hazard of the electrical industry requires the bravery and the skills of the workers to fix and generate electricity, therefore not many people have enough courage to do this job. Without the assistance of the electricians, residents will not have electricity to utilize electrical devices. Moreover, the water drainage system is set underground, so that only resilient workers who are willing to jump into the dirty and contaminated water to solve the problem. For instance, the salary range for electricians in Vietnam is higher than other white-collar officers since the government perceive the dangerous environment that electricians have to work all day, even when extreme weather.
On the other hand, the crucial of intellectual classes can not be replaced to maintain an advanced civilisation. People who have opportunities to pursue university will have stable academic background to contribute their knowledges and talents for modern innovation of a country. There are number doctors are strive hard to explore new antibiotics for rare diseases and save the lives of the community, especially the poorness. For instance, researchers in Oxford has developed successfully a kit test for early detecting of COVID-19, who become saviors with millions of citizen around the world. In addition, scientists are researching nonstopable to develop artificial intelligence such as robots to not only help miners discover dangerous areas in mining, but also control artificial satellites to explore new planets for the humanity.
To sum up, I believe that the government should encourage both on vocational training to increase more qualified workers, and provide more opportunity for people to join in university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'strived', 'striven'.
Suggestion: strived; striven
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53935860058 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06667569621 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588921282799 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.083458571 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.153846154 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295474778771 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953860514158 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980216835723 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197265616691 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101838770224 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.