It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Undoubtlay, every person has a special talent and was born for a particular task. In some people it can be advert before any teaching called talent and some people believe there are many child with a special talent, some else have this opinion which can have a good talnet by wanderfull training and teaching. In my opinion the second hypothises it can be true and children could have good talent by a good taught.
Among of all children there are few percent who have a special talent for example, in soccer, Although there are lots of soccer player in whole of the world some of them have special capability in it such as Messi and Maradonna and can rapidly promote. Having a wanderfull art could help you learn different things faster than normal but don’t have this option it is not a disadvantage.
There are many of children who was born whitout any special skill but can be taught by a very good teacher or tutor to promote and grow up. In such cases the Education systems and parents have very crucial role to bringing them. children should promote their skills and abilities in their first years that will help in their adult. For this every child should be given a test before starting the education. This test shows what filed is good for different child and they can taught in this special area.
In conclusion, if a person don’t have any special skill he/she could learn many various thing from their totur and parent that can help and emerge it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun child seems to be countable; consider using: 'many children'.
Suggestion: many children
...alent and some people believe there are many child with a special talent, some else have t...
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Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'children'?
Suggestion: children
... and some people believe there are many child with a special talent, some else have t...
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Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'percents'?
Suggestion: percents
.... Among of all children there are few percent who have a special talent for example, ...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...ave very crucial role to bringing them. children should promote their skills and abiliti...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'teach'
Suggestion: teach
...s good for different child and they can taught in this special area. In conclusion, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62835249042 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2255556977 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2168175772 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.818181818 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229007807721 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989009465923 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757843348153 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14371766578 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10109396562 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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