It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion./.
It is thought that talents are given from birth, which are unique skills about sport, art or about studies. However, others say that talent based on idividual efforts and through education, anyone can become a sport athletes or a musician. I firmly believe that children can be professor in any fields, and talent plays just a small role.
Depends on first opinion, talents play a significant role in kid’ career. Genius of centuries often show interest and outstanding skills about particular field in early age. Mozart’s talents were flourished during his young age. When he was 4, he could write simple songs and later, Mozart became one of the best composer in history. Natural abilities rise chance not only in music, but also in sports, which require durable, strength, height and flexible, and other fields.
However, natural talents are not the major influences on someone career. Although in many cases, having a good body build and physical health can help a child taking more advantages at certain sports, sport also needs supportive strategy, backbone and technique. For instance, basketball athletes are mostly tall, but there are enough percentage of professional basketball players proving that height is not the most important feature. Thus, studies showed more percentage of genius musicians who were born without any marked music talents.
In conclusion, natural talents give children a good initial performance. But having talents is not as important as spending efforts and immensly training. Only by that way, child can be a professor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'athlete'?
Suggestion: athlete
...gh education, anyone can become a sport athletes or a musician. I firmly believe that ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31325301205 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56290356862 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66265060241 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.469594486 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232158584888 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671584004165 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051795276171 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135295955738 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632474661533 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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