Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People's opinions differ as to whether or not museums should be entertaining or educational. While I toward the viewpoint that exhibitions of museums are mostly entertaining people and visitors, I would argue that museums should be both entertaining and educational.
On the one hand, the main role of museums indeed is to entertain people. There are many extraordinary experiences are provided in its exhibitions. For instance, some history museums give their visitors the chance to go back to the past in a virtual world through up-to-date simulation technology such as virtual reality equipment. This means that everyone can feel and undergo the historical events and backgrounds even in the modern day. Additionally, the museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than education because the visitor may become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educational content. Objects in its exhibitions, therefore, are designed to be visually magnificent so that people are curious and excited constantly.
Although the museums mainly concentrate on entertainment, I believe integrated educational activities should be considered. I highly appreciate creative learning through reality interactive experiences in the museum. This natural learning method might help many people who hardly absorb boring academic lessons or content to feel more excited and desirable in accumulating new knowledge. Furthermore, some famous museums even provide tour guides or headsets as commentary means for their exhibitions.
In conclusion, it seems to me that museums should aim to integrate useful knowledge into their interesting and innovative exhibitions so that people can have fun and learn somethings at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61278195489 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11341980679 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5445060333 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359475635893 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124768978423 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110287529571 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22349946026 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114164947778 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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