In some countries it is compulsory for all young people to join the armed forces for some time. What are the benefits of requiring young people to serve the army? Does participation in community work qualify as an alternative.
Joining the military as a volunteer is obligatory for the young generation in some countries. There are numerous benefits of requiring young people to join the military.
While some people argue that it is mandatory, some alternatives such as work as a volunteer in community work can be taken into consideration.
Perticipation in army for some time has many advantages. Firstly, military training is full of discipline. It can improve the descipline among the youth. They are more likely be very aware about their time. A descipline youth can change the whole nation scenario. Secondly, army training increases the strength of arm, improves the physical abilities and help to prevent different diseases. Army traning increase the efficiency and also improve the menthal health. Additionally, it can help to reduce anxity, stress, and depression. Moreover, military training learn how to work in a group, emphasize leadership and group work skills. It also help to grow up social skills that is very needed for the youth. Army training also boost the analytical abilities. Youth can contribute themself to the nation in a crisis situation like in COVID-19 pandemic condition by joining in the army for some time.
However, some young people can not cope with the army training beacuse of their physical condition. For this reason, an alternative, participation in community work can help him to gain the same social skills. A social worker has a lot of responsibilities, have to doing their best for the society. It will also enhance patriotism as they are serving the country. Joining in social work as a volunteer for the youth can assist to being a good human as a whole. So it is the closest alternative to participation in the military.
In conclusion, Military training help the youth to prepare for the future. A disciplined, physically and mentally strong young generation is blessing for the country. But this is not suitable for a part of the youth because of their physical condition. Without them, the whole nation wil go backword. For this, an alternative, particapation in community work can help them to keep up with others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11079545455 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94322432182 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480113636364 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8500382907 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.1923076923 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88461538462 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349127919775 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956100271295 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886840372013 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239516815029 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0834527931338 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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