Currently, there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Recently, the use of supplementary forms of medicine has been more advertised. I believe that the alternative approaches to medicine might be ineffective, even worse, they might have detrimental side effects. In this essay, the rational reasons for this statement will be discussed.
To commence, although various alternative medicinal methods have been suggested for treating different illnesses, they have not been scientifically approved. In other words, the effectiveness of those medicinal remedies has not been confirmed by scientific evidence. To exemplify, currently, some supplementary drugs have been prescribed for the treatment of hair loss. However, unfortunately, most of those medications are not effective. Furthermore, disappointedly, some alternative medications might have devastating side effects on patients’ health. To investigate this vividly, some herbal medication might be recommended for the treatment of some diseases. However, the use of high dosages of those might cause poison.
Nevertheless, some adjuvant approaches have been suggested for curing patients for ages ago. To give you an example, acupuncture was one of the most important modalities in Chinese culture. Although this modality has been academically documented to be effective against some medical conditions such as neuralgia, anxiety, and depression, no proof has shown the effectiveness of this method for eradicating some other illnesses such as cancer and hepatitis. Therefore, patients should follow the remedies their physician prescribe for them.
To conclude, in this day and age, numerous medicinal approaches have been suggested for patients. Unfortunately, some are not scientifically authorized by the healthcare system. I opine that individuals must follow their treatment according to specialist devices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03474903475 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31778647601 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2203987382 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9411764706 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117526328434 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426215674325 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420315264329 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895551134724 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622564241199 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.1 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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