The working week should be shorter and workers should have longer weekend.
Do you agree or disagree?
In today's society, people need work to survive and they need appropriate leaves to energise as well. Some people believe that the working period needs to be short and employees need a long weekend, while others disagree with this statement. In this essay, I will explain why I agree with this statement and I support my opinions with concrete examples.
On the one hand, when people have longer weekends they can focus more on their work. Because when people have more weekends they will spend time with their loved ones. Moreover, they feel happy and it helps to boost their selves as well. For example, The Japanese government introduced four days of work per week and it will lead to significant growth in their economy. Therefore, employees need a break to give their full focus to the company. Additionally, people improve their self by physically and mentally. In other words, they will go on a vacation with friends or else read self-help books to be a knowledgeable person.
On the other hand, longer breaks might lead to an increase in their workload. In brief, when individuals take a longer weekend their daily work will be affected and it will result in stress. For instance, In China university students conducted research regarding employee's mental health 50% of people were affected by stress.
In conclusion, while the longer breaks might lead to an increase in their workload and stress, the benefits such as spending time with their loved ones and improve their self by physically and mentally far outweigh the drawbacks. Therefore, I strongly believe the working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in brief, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51623587411 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5300167243 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231459363941 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911116519478 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154174675239 0.0667982634062 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154299197958 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943632897112 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.