Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Increasingly, the notion of cooperation has been put forward and advocated on many ocassions. However, I maintain that although it brings us countless benefits, competiton also plays a dispensable role in our daily life, and both can be advantagous.
First and foremost, competing with others is conductive to surpassing oneself. Only through competitions with others can we know our own state, as well as others' conditions. That is the reason why schools have examinations and grades for students, and companies have salaries according to working performances. During competitions, we are inclined to think more about how to behave better than others. As a result, we spend more time and energy at study or work, which enhance personal development. Furthermore, comparisons between others create proper peer pressure and tense, which assist us to be motivated, take more actions and achieve better.
However, cooperating is also of great significance in our life, which allows us complete challenging issues we can not overcome by oneself. When there is a throny problem, more people may spark more innovative ideas or put more energy and time into it, making the solution more quicly be found out. Additionally, learning to collaberate with others cultivates gives us an enriching experience of teamwork, which would be particularly helpful in the future career. More importantly, in modern society, cooperating has become an interal part to maintain the world to be peaceful and stronger. We are confronted numerous global issues, resulting negotiations and cooerations between countires' leaders a necessary part.
From my perspective, although some people may argure that competitons would definely bring conflicting views, it is a crucial method to learn about ourselves and others. What's more, competitons and cooperations are not opposite, which could exert both of their influences to the development of individuals and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53020134228 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0655423109 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651006711409 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4402596607 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.866666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239456029108 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728425231936 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391010026528 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12507606022 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680047601666 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.