Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that advertisements are becoming increasingly common in our daily life. Some people argue that they are everywhere that we should not pay attention to them any more, but I maintain that advertising does play a significant role in our decision-making when shopping and we can't avoid it completely.
On the one hand, some people support the viewpoit that advertising succeeds in talking people into making purchases. The overriding reason for it is that some advertisements contain useful information which is largely decisive when people happen to need to buy these certain items. Some basic attributes such as prices, sizes, functions can be known and taken into consideration by people through these posters or flyers, which contributes a lot to making wise decisions. Additionally, as an imperative marketing tool for merchants, these advertisements are made attractive and vivid to catch people's attention, and sometimes even be represented by celeberities, making rather more people would buy them.
On the other hand, there are also thoughts in favor of not paying attention to advertising any more since it is such a common phenomenon. In today's consumer society, materialism has been even popular than ever before, and merchants use every method to persuade citizens to spend money on their products to earn more incomes. Spreading their advertisements and broadcasting their advertising programmes has been the most common measure. For instance, whether we are watching television, using a certain app or browsing some websites, some pop-up flyers are inevitable, bringnig poor user experience and spoil our moods, especially these are things we don't need. As a solution, we should just ignore them and close them.
From my perspective, there is no deny that advertisements are becomming more and more common, even sometimes make people annoying, but they do provide some useful information which can heip us make reasonable decisions. No longer paying attention might lead us to poor-informed. What we should do is to utilize them when we need and ignore them when we don't need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...not pay attention to them any more, but I maintain that advertising does play a s...
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Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ur decision-making when shopping and we cant avoid it completely. On the one hand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, even so, for instance, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31137724551 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03308042988 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571856287425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3611927993 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.714285714 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29726817728 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111384213777 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526036277045 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188958478344 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024605757932 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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