Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
These days, there is an ongoing debate among people about age discrimination and if it should be viewed as a legal or illegal act. Some people believe that older workers should be positively discriminated, but others think that it is not acceptable and it should be illegal as well. My view is that age discrimination is not moral and it cannot be allowed by companies. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view analyzing both side of the argument.
There are several reasons why age discrimination is not acceptable and it affects work environment. One of them is that discrimination against older people affect young employees negatively. Not only their concentration, but also their mood will be affected during positive discrimination against older. It can also be argued that generally older people have enough money to live at the end of their life. So, companies do not need to make any extra incentives to them. It should also be taken into account that older employees use these additional right wrongly and it can break peaceful environment in the workplace.
Those who support age discrimination have different view and say that it can be actually a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that elderly employees need more care and money to support their financial status. Their expenses are much more that regular employee. Moreover, they have much more experience than others and it is worth to earn much more them.
While there are strong arguments on both side of the case, my personal opinion is that age discrimination should not be allowed because of working environment peace and lack of motivation in the work place. I would strongly recommend that employers should behave equally to all their employees, if they want to increase their productivity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 63, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... arguments on both side of the case, my personal opinion is that age discrimination should not b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 20.9802955665 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87450570591 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 4.6157635468 238% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3850931014 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258814325359 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887194112982 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763326851131 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15800806586 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603236531626 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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