Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person's age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the age discrimination in the work place can lead to thought-provoking discussions. Irrespective of the numerous argument that exit on either site, my opinion is that the discrimination against older workers should be made illegal to secure fair assessment between all workers.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To begin with, many companies have certain strict policy for the work environment, and it should be the bases of any employee`s performance assessment. It is important to note that when the company deals fairly with workers without considering the aspect of age, this enhances the work environment and company production. Therefore, the aforementioned discussion shows that without neglecting such discrimination of age, company`s improvement is doubtful.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that the career progress shall be equally provided for all workers, and the only measuring factor is his KPI in the work. First and foremost, if the company does not promote any skillful employee due to his age, a legal action should be considered by the authorities. this exemplifies that the importance of equal consideration for all workers.
In conclusion, I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, my opinion is that any decision on the basis of a person`s age should be made illegal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39662447257 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30855502382 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586497890295 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4910517887 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.9 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249290833887 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902431019856 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686783916442 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155630585222 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464534185244 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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