Can money bring happiness? What are the factors for happiness?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in getting happiness through money thanks to the ubiquity of state-of-the-art technology,would lead to a myriad of concerns. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that in order to get relaxation, happiness plays a crucial role in human life. Not only has the modern fast era brought a lot of opportunities all across the globe, but it has also provided various facilities to make our lives comfortable and convenient. Needless to say, all these merits stand people in all good stead, when it comes to broadening their horizons.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that in order to deal with this soaring problem government should take effective steps, which are not remote or complicated but accessible and practicable. Besides, awareness programme should be organised to make people aware about this issue. Last but not least , local councils and state authorities should take the necessary initiatives cumulatively. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of this trend.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the potential benefits of money are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , would
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...are about this issue. Last but not least , local councils and state authorities sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14418604651 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00901708427 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641860465116 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.50365209 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090152332406 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293244530324 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483244925807 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609463224578 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409281186802 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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