In a cashless society, people use more credit cards, do you think cashless society is realistic and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is cashless society and it has led to a discussion, as to whether cashless society has beneficial impacts to human's society. As such, there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the positive effects outweigh the negative ones.
To begin with, there is a myrid of reasons why cashless society significantly facilitates and sharpens today's modern society. Yet, the most preponderant one lines in the fact that people now can easily obtain cash and make transactions without carrying pocket. More specifically, according to a survey from three universities in Australia, approximately 90% of the respondents agree that if it were not for cashless, they would not have been able to experience such enormous improvements in their lives.
On the other hand, as the famous saying: every coin has two sides, someone holds the other opinons, and they believe that cashless would demotivate people to be hard working. Hence, it is apparently why many are against of it.
To conclude, it is an irrefutable fact that cashless society has become a magical elixir of everyone's life, because it essentially facilitates the development of our well being. Although, cashless society may have some negative impacts from the aforementioned, I still believe that cashless are advantageous for human development and essential in this globalised world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...society and it has led to a discussion, as to whether cashless society has beneficial impacts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, if, may, so, still, well, as to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24890829694 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96423897259 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615720524017 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9310635888 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.555555556 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259193333897 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100472908825 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715019639956 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146501823027 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294970284257 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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