Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad?
One of the most contentious issues today relates to how famous athletes or actors can be a controversial topic for people to follow by. In this essay, I will explore the positive and negative effects of celebrity's imitation on human behaviour.
To begin with, I feel strongly that a role model can be the primary source for success. The reason for this is that mimicking an individual talent can play an important role in society. In addition, hard working ethics can be also a major aspect that relates to modern society these days, so people must pay close attention to it. For example, Christian Ronaldo who is known as the most hard working footballer in the world has been undoubtedly inspire many people to commit their routine as well as eating habit.
On the other hand, I feel just as convinced that the fake values from celebrities' fame has profoundly impacted on many people beliefs. I often argue that in fact the importance of manner and behaviour must not be overlooked because false delusion may effect our development progress. Furthermore, it is believed that media will continue to thrive and influence of celebrities.
In conclusion, the side effect of celebrity's immitation is considered either moral and immoral. I do believe that in the future our new generation will be able to choose and learn from smart people such as politics or inventors instead of a brainless movie star.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'inspired'.
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, may, so, well, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9243697479 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71025014148 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638655462185 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9382215668 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.545454545 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7272727273 7.25397266985 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0719926880157 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291979109853 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04471974119 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509322277452 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358882779733 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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