Increasing Xenophobia in many countries. Discuss the causes and solution

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Increasing Xenophobia in many countries. Discuss the causes and solution

Migration to developed countries from third world countries is becoming widespread and is common across the globe. However, many people argue and fear that people from these countries are considered as a risk to the local population which is due to a myriad of reasons. This essay will discuss the reasons why people in developed countries are suffering from Xenophobia and provide a solution.

To begin with, many people oppose the concept of accepting expats of different countries due to a plethora of notions. Firstly, the denizens of the host country believe that the foreigners are grabbing all the local opportunities and leaving the local economy to a detrimental state. For instance, a recent attack in the city of Paris, France, has killed 5 Afro-Americans as a result of Xenophobia and racial discrimination. As a result, both the immigrants and the citizen of the host country are living in fear but for different reasons.

Nonetheless, the aforementioned fear is meaningless and can be eradicated with proper measures. One possibility is to educate the people that they don't have any reason to afraid of outsiders and make them understand that the local economy is thriving because of immigrants. Moreover, in educational institutions, awareness classes should be conducted by the local municipality to provide insights to the students. To exemplify, many schools in Canada has a compulsory subject that involves in providing the necessary knowledge about migration and its benefits. Thus, awareness will mitigate the situation and change the notion of the people.

This essay described why people are afraid of foreigners and also, ed solution to overcome the fear. In my opinion, Xenophobia among the people is pointless and meaningless if the government provides proper insights to its people. people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lity is to educate the people that they dont have any reason to afraid of outsiders ...
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Suggestion: People
...provides proper insights to its people. people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, third, thus, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32179930796 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01340579017 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532871972318 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2636747666 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.25397266985 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0931572862781 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313831938107 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348448016267 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571388737913 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226400168836 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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