Medical technology can increase humans life expectancy. Is it a blessing or a curse?
The life expectancy of people has been increased due to the development of medical science which sparked a heated argument among certain groups of individuals. Many people consider this as an achievement of technology. Others reject this notion and don't see this as a positive development. This essay will elaborate on the positive side of the medical field which is becoming a boon. To start with, there is no doubt that development in the medical field has increased the life expectancy of people. A recent data shows that the average death of a person has increased from 50 percent in 1990 to 70 percent in 2019. Consequently, early deaths are decreased. Secondly, there are many benefits to the improvement in life expectancy, humans are making health-related decisions and this achievement can be attributed to improvement in public health and medical care. For example, new inventions in the medical field had found solutions to many dreadful diseases such as cancer, HIV and many. As a result, life expectancy has been increased during these years. From above, the advancements in medical technology creates advantages for future life. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that an increase in the average life expectancy rate can help people to live a healthy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e people who are suffering from the hard diseases like blood cancer and brain tum...
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...od cancer and brain tumer. To sum up,advance development on health sector may improv...
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...rovide better health for various users. Hence medical technology is one of the most i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, then, well, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 20.9802955665 14% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 31.9359605911 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 1207.87684729 64% => OK
No of words: 156.0 242.827586207 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98076923077 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.92707691288 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46022768252 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 139.433497537 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 379.143842365 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.443940041 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114693817362 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624094374295 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596965107027 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824001153037 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409226661392 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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