Nowadays, many people take drugs. What is an impact of drugs on society today?
In the pastime, people used to take drugs in form of remedy and to cure the desease but these days taking drugs in terms of alcohol, smoke of different types of sedatives. Some people believe that taking drugs cause the destructive future in terms of financial losses and chronical desases while other people argue that intake of drugs calm their souls to get the life's objective. In this essay, I shall discuss both views by analyzing this argument and explore the logical conclusion.
To start with, there are multifarious and ubiquitous bad influences of any such drugs which secede the link in between humanitarian. One of them is morale of individual goes down as it cause less control on in taker. Ebriety always is pursuit-ed in different flavors such as tobacco, cigarettes and other drugs. In addition people taking extra dose of drugs cause them to commence the violation and assault in rape case. Indulging the first step in drugs life without any norms and regulations, it secede the link to success and later it destroys the individual's life.
On contrary, people believe that drugs always play a pivotal role to consider their success. People influenced with drug's reaction causes pompous talk and do not perform extraordinary. Such action which push them out of control gives them direction to indulge into crimes such as murder, rape and shoplifting etc. They do scrawl and road rage and go through these indiscipline crimes. They also argue that taking one shot of alcohol will release their tension but oppositely cause loss of life in many cases.
In recapitulate, there are strong facts discussed for this argument and in my personal opinion intake of drugs always not have profound impact until it is prescribed. People should care their health before taking these drugs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, as to, in addition, such as, in many cases, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00668896321 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5128076532 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8156864676 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235904226723 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778918853227 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654866123913 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150635778026 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379833650066 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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