Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that parents are responsible for a vast number of aspects in their children' lives while some people have the opponent view. I believe that parents are counted as the most effective ones in children's progress and the most significant one is ethical issues.
Parents are first teachers in a child's life. Children spend a considerable amount of time with their parents. As a result, parents have responsibility for their children in terms of many aspects. For example, they have to fulfil children's basic needs. They should provide a calm place for upbringing the children, as well as their, nurturing them. Moreover, they should teach them moral lessons. Most children imitate their parents' behaviour. For most of them, parents play as a role model. Due to this, the parental role is undeniable.
In addition, parents have a close relationship with their children. They know the positive and negative issues of their children. So, they have the capacity to correct and improve their bad behaviours. Thus, in the future, this would be advantageous for children social behaviour. They would be valuable citizens who are concerned about moral principles.
In conclusion, although different people have different opinions about parents' effect on children, I extremely agree that parents can play a significant role in their behaviour and they are legally responsible for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27802690583 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73465401148 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551569506726 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2507795173 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.2352941176 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1176470588 20.9669160288 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2524317005 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990032456074 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663920476885 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179783759209 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481927308937 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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