Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable to say that, violence by juveniles has increased in recent years at an alarming rate in our society. Children are involving themselves in crime and making our society jeopardize. Considering this, some people opine that parents should be responsible for their young one’s fault, while others argue parents should not be punished. The following paragraphs will analyze the inevitable reasons, and thus will lead to a plausible conclusion.
On one hand, parents should not be blamed for their children’s fault as the decision to commit the crime is entirely made by the children. There are many parents who have done their best part in the upbringing of their children so that their child cannot commit any offence, yet, their offspring still succeed in committing the same. Moreover, mass media is playing a crucial role in making adolescents aggressive. For example, currently, there are many violent games and movies that are being released in the market. This makes a child more violent which could be one of the reasons for committing the crime.
On the other hand, parents should be held accountable for their children’s crimes because parents are the first people that a child gets to know after he or she is born. It is believed that parents start shaping the child’s moral compass and character from a very young age. In addition, most of the children do offence because they were violently abused by their parents when they were young. For instance, according to 2013 statistics, in America, most offences were made by juvenile belongs to a criminal family.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that, parents should not be solely blamed and punished for their children’s actions. Other factors should be taken into account when deciding on whom to blame. The government must take some prudent steps to educate children in their schools so that they do not commit a crime.
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... will lead to a plausible conclusion. On one hand, parents should not be blame...
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...the reasons for committing the crime. On the other hand, parents should be hel...
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...uvenile belongs to a criminal family. To recapitulate, I pen down saying that,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 316.0 242.827586207 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11075949367 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72664185201 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7766470791 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9375 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184586329855 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065895252609 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532902493286 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125792307297 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194548212377 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.