Some people believe that exploring outer space is important. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money.
Nowadays you can travel without problems to the moon if you have enough money. In a few years it will be
the same with other planets. Regarding that the earth is in danger, scientologists pretend there are just a few
years left, it is very important to look for alternatives. If there is a planet where human being is able to survive
it should be found soon. Otherwise menhood will die out. As already mentioned, we actually have to be scared
about the world going under. Based on experts it will come soon, nature will take its place back either by water
or by erruptions/earth quakes. Thus, we really need an alternative.
As I know a planet similar to our Earth has already been found. Now there are doing some test about the
ability to life there. I think in future travelling from Earth to Saturn will be like today travelling from Sydney to
Melbourne. Thus, it is really important that they are goining on doing tests there.
To sum up, it is a good idea to examine space. There is hope, that something even better than Earth will be
found. Actually, I would like to see another planet, but I think that won't happen in that time.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much money on clothing to improve their appearance 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. 70
- Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they differ from specific points made in the reading passage. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ery important to look for alternatives. If there is a planet where human being is ...
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Line 4, column 26, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...le to survive it should be found soon. Otherwise menhood will die out. As already mentio...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s. Thus, we really need an alternative. As I know a planet similar to our Earth ha...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, really, regarding, so, thus, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 1207.87684729 78% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54807692308 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44901788672 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 379.143842365 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.719021958 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.0666666667 104.977214359 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.12807881773 266% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0355088417143 0.242375264174 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0137986005083 0.0925447433944 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265445243331 0.071462118173 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0139074078342 0.151781067708 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020162465057 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 12.6369458128 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 53.1260098522 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.9458128079 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.5310837438 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 55.0591133005 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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