There is no need for newspapers in modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no need for newspapers in modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days , there is ongoing debate between people about there is no need of newspaper in modern world . Some seems to be either passionate supporter or same seem to be opponents . They may have theoretical and empirical agreements and disagreements . In this essay , I shall demonstrate my opinion by analyzing both sides of an argument .

These are several reasons why there is no need for newspapers in modern world ? .One of them is that Internet is replaced the newspaper via mode of mobiles which is accessible in every region all around the globe . It can also be argued that digital media like Television can access live news , games and movies . It can also be taken to accounts that human minds are now familiar with digital media than newspaper because newspapers are only usable for literate people while any body can understand through digital media .

Those who argue that newspapers are still needful in current era in terms of education and reading skills . Firstly , it is claimed that digital media is accessible only in developed countries ,In other terms , Digital media requires electricity and internet which are costly factors in terms of poor and developing countries . while newspaper can be reached to every person with lower cost . secondly the most important , Newspaper improves the reading skills and beneficial for students and readers .

While there are strong arguments on both sides on coin in this topic . My personal opinion is that newspaper is still a strong communication factor in all around the globe . Most important is that its effective way to express the view of problems ,challenges and solutions in the terms of various factors of society .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09818181818 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67662247786 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0791589429 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4666666667 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.33497536946 619% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176775097109 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697546827556 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107213342826 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102346909096 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528369065452 0.0609392437508 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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