Team sports are generally promoted as a great way to keep fit and build character. However, sporting events such as soccer matches are often accompanied by violence between rival supporters and other forms of antisocial behavior. If sporting events can lead to antisocial behavior, can team sports really be good for us?
In this day and age, group sports are generally influential to health and character building. Although the violence between spectators of two team is along with antisocial behaviors, sporting events such as soccer and volleyball matches became money builder and job creator. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze why team sports are really good for us.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support group sports as beneficial teams. At first, occasionally, the struggle between the fans of sporting events become extreme and antisocial. However, the rival supporters have turned team sports as the basis of an industry. For example, by the constantly matches among group sports generated many jobs and profit for these teams by works such as prints ads on dresses and field advertising.
In addition, the only negative is the battle between spectators, but group teams have benefits for people's character. individuals like young people learn the way of communication in these teams. The parents can send their embarrassed kids to group sports to learn social behavior. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by a psychological institution in 2017 has shown that a significant number of shy children become more social after a while play in team sports.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments this statements, I profoundly believe that the benefits of group sports in the field of social impacts and economy are far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28151260504 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78905841331 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7466549148 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330181319919 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121998834269 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074830916923 0.071462118173 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188396322506 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102647787857 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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