A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
The issue that whether a person who commits a crime and is proven guilty by the concerned judiciary system should retain any civil rights or not is a contentious one. The individual has committed a crime and thereby broken the protocol assigned by the society. Furthermore, the individual has been involved in an act that questions the humanity of the person. While each side of the issue has its own virtues and shortcomings, I concede with the speaker that individual who has been proven guilty should not be further entitled to enjoy any of his or her civil rights.
First, one of the primary measures to extrapolate the well being of a society is based on the social safety of its citizens. Thus the law and order is established in the form of a judiciary system. Which ensures that the citizens are given their rights and that any individual violating the rights of other citizens are thereby punished. Thus as much as it is the responsibility of the administration to ensure that the citizens enjoy their rights, so is it the responsibility of the citizens that they do not indulge in activities that deteriorate the well being of the society as a whole. Thus when the individual fails to follow the contract, the society also has the rights to take back the civil rights given to the citizen.
Second, the citizen proven guilty may have committed a crime that involves the violation of humanity and thus if a strict action is not taken against the acquitted, it citizens may lose trust in the judiciary system. For example, the "Nirbhaya" rape case which shook the whole of India involved the brutal rape and murder of an innocent. Four men raped a women passenger in a moving bus and then mercilessly threw away her body on the road. If a stringent action is not taken against the criminals in this case it might so happen that such crimes continue to take place in the future.
Many critics to this view point argue that not all crimes are equally severe. Thus if the citizens are not given their civil rights like the right the reap the benefits of their labor it may lead to the injustice of the part of the criminals who have already been sentenced for their the crime. This in no way undermines the argument that criminals committing severe crimes should be declined the right to enjoy their civil rights. The solution to this can be the setup of a system that ensures that a detailed analysis of various factors like the previous criminal records, the circumstances under which the crime was conducted, etc. must be made before a commensurate abolition of civil rights is applied on the criminal.
In the final analysis of the issue, the criminal should not retain their civil rights if they have been proven guilty. Despite this stand, I concede that each case should be scrutinized before the final call is taken so that no innocent is deprived from their fundamental rights.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, then, thus, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2399.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 507.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73175542406 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64056527916 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43392504931 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4747461608 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.95 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.35 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330586760017 0.243740707755 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096554136764 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901741350208 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174527656394 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971282845187 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.