If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
If I could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, I would like to meet Sardar Vallabhbhai Patel. Who gave a huge contribution to relive Indian peoples from Britishers. Sardar Patel was from Gujarat, which is a part of India. He is known in all over the world for his bravery as well as calmness as per the situation. There are several reasons for me to meet Sardar Patel, and I would like to ask him many questions and take suggestions from him.
First of all, he was a great example of bravery. Let's take one example related to his life, when he was young he suffered from disease in his underarm. And he had to cut those extra part of skin from his underarm. He was ready to do that but a man who would made that cutting was not ready to do that because of fear. So that Sardar Patel himself cut that part from his underarm. There are several reasons of their bravery, so that I would like to ask him that how he could develop that kind of bravery in him.
Another think is that, he was a man who assembled different regions of country by requesting all the leaders of that region and make it a single country India. We think that it was an easy task, but we are wrong. It was harder task then freedom. He was not only convinced them but also completed that task peacefully. So that I would like to ask him that how he could develop that type of calmness in him.
In sum up, I would like to meet Sardar Patel because I also want to develop bravery and calmness in myself. Because in this 21st century it is the most require thing in peoples all over the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, well, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21639344262 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19868764454 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459016393443 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5094952891 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4444444444 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184138011591 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666133516947 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119371561551 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120781906803 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101121768194 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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