If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would
you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer
I come from one of the smallest countries in europe, Montenegro. Being smallest country doesn’t have necessary to mean the poorest too, but in my country’s case it is. my hometown is Podgorica, the capital and the biggest city of Montenegro. Although it has rich history my city doesn’t have much to offer to tourists and its citizens. that one thing that I would like to change about my hometown is exactly to improve its touristic offer.
As I said earlier Podgorica is a few centuries old town, with rich history and culture. there live people of different ethnic, religions, habits, customs, and culture. if you imagine my town as a mixture of these differences you may come to conclusion that it is very interesting town, but you will be wrong. I’m sorry that things are this way, but one day as I was surfing the Internet I’ve come to an article that said that Podgorica is the most boring capital city in europe. that finding made me think how a town with that much differences and rich culture can be that boring. Immediately in my head I started to look for a solution.
First thing that came to my mind was to enrich and use what we have, to attract people from other cities and countries and to make the town more interesting for the people who live there every day. During the Second World War, Podgorica was bombed more than seventy times so its entire cultural and historic heritage has been destroyed. things that survived are ruins, but there is something more important and that are stories, legends, interesting facts about the town and its places.
I think that the solution for the existing problem is to build buildings, monuments, to repair and restore ruins, to make historical locations accessible for tourists. if we take stories, legends and historical facts, we can rebuild, reform and transform our touristic offer based on them. Also we can use what we have now, churches, museums, beautiful nature, and sightseeing places to attract people.
I know that my town doesn’t have to bear the title of the most boring capital city in the europe and I know that we can use its potentials. it is time to show people our history and how interesting our town can be!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, so, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79533678756 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62881380687 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0416355636 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4210526316 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3157894737 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.10526315789 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100526875765 0.236089414692 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0338892469753 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514463205877 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537139693951 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297652322641 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.