People emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new road for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays we can see that the biggest cities around the world are getting crowded. Too much traffic to deal with is disturbing the population. In my opinion, a very efficient method to solve population's problems would be to develop adavanced transport systems.
Building a new road is not apt to do so. It would bring chaos for cities that are already overcrowded. I remember some years ago when I was living in a big city. I had to commute by car. Government had built new roads at that time. At the begining was ok the development of such roads, however as soon as vehicles started using them the city got chaos. Therefore, it was almost impossible to move around the city.
Advanced transport system is one the best way to solve cities traffic. It is a win-win for either population and government. It may come through subways as we can find in Japan. In Japan, there is a very efficient train system. The trains arrive in time and are very fast. It is said that japanese use only trains to commute. In addition, building an advanced transport system would make people's life easier.
Finally, not only building advanced transport systems would bring peace to population but also, would it make people's life better.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72769953052 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5479163475 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.5024630542 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4199112952 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.9444444444 104.977214359 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8333333333 20.9669160288 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 2.91625615764 343% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228653834033 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646303383745 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854778308597 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125205633901 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615056066677 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 12.6369458128 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 53.1260098522 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.9458128079 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.3980295567 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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