IN SOME COUNTRIES, TEENAGERS ARE ENCOURAGED TO DO PART-TIME JOBS BY SOME PEOPLE. OTHERS DISAGREE.
DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
Globally working as a part-timers for teenagers is becoming quite common now a days. there is a section of society which agrees with this notion for adolscents to work in part-time jobs where as there are some people totally disgree. In the below paragraphs I will educidate both the views with relevent examples and put forward my opinion.
First and foremost there are many advantages for young adolescents to work as in part-time jobs the most preponderant one being that it teaches them to be responsible and in calculates discipline at a juvenile age. Such a trend is most common in students who study overseas in European countries where it is a mandate from the governments especially for teenagers to work in part-time jobs for certain hours of a week.
Similarly, others believe that working in temporary does not allow juvenile minds to focus on their studies thus impacting their examination results. Additionally, since teenagers get paid salaries in the part-time jobs they consider it an alluring factor thus it discourages them to complete their tertiary education as some adolescents drop out from their schooling. In recent trends from a leading newspaper from the United States, it was stated that around 30 per cent of kids drop out from universities and higher secondary schools as they start earning money from doing makeshift jobs.
To conclude both arguments elucidated above are valid but looking from a long-term perspective I agree with the former argument as it provides exposure and calculates certain key habits which aid teenagers in future endeavours of their professional front moreover government should make it mandatory for teenage children to pursue tertiary education so that it does not impact their education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a part-timer' or simply 'part-timers'?
Suggestion: a part-timer; part-timers
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... for teenagers is becoming quite common now a days. there is a section of society which ag...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, second, similarly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21908127208 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81707229502 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611307420495 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.1983886708 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.111111111 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4444444444 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190753522968 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820419832789 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451711848266 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113678219022 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537160736919 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.