IN SOME COUNTRIES, TEENAGERS ARE ENCOURAGED TO DO PART-TIME JOBS BY SOME PEOPLE. OTHERS DISAGREE.
DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
The number of middle class families are growing every day and raising the necessity of all healthy family members to participate in earning money. As a member of low level income family I must say young family members should actively participate in financial support of their family. Temporary and leisure jobs will not only less financial burden to the family but also increases sense of responsibility in teenagers. Let's look into various pros and cons of this aspect as discussed in below paras.
People who start working in part-time jobs in their young age have good social behaviour and better communication skill. As it is part of their every day work to behave friendly with co workers and costumers,they tend to grow in more healthy atmosphere. College students choose to work in areas related to their future career or education. For Instance, a medical student who wish to become doctor, start to work in internships which stirs his curiosity. However, one should not jeopardise main stream education and legal restrictions about minimum age of children to work.
Recently, it is revealed many children started to work as young as 10 years to support their parents. Sudden school drops due to poverty and financial difficulties are main reason. Hence, government officials should take strict actions against child labour. Encouraging teenagers to do part-time work does not mean exploiting children.Idea behind this argument is reasonably aged teenagers should be able to financially support themselves and their education without burdening their parents.
Nevertheless, one should know that any imbalance created in work life may disturb our future goals. Anomalies created by such imbalances should be immediately rectified before it creates chaos in our lives. Deviations which affect of career and goals should be immediately aborted. Health, both physical and mental , education are uncompromisable aspects in one's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...embers to participate in earning money. As a member of low level income family I m...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...s sense of responsibility in teenagers. Lets look into various pros and cons of this...
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Suggestion:
... skill. As it is part of their every day work to behave friendly with co workers ...
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Suggestion: , they
...e friendly with co workers and costumers,they tend to grow in more healthy atmosphere...
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Suggestion: Idea
... work does not mean exploiting children.Idea behind this argument is reasonably aged...
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...borted. Health, both physical and mental , education are uncompromisable aspects i...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ducation are uncompromisable aspects in ones life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42763157895 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83105593746 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648026315789 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5722602525 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0588235294 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07290906784 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210735233631 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369071091451 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416381899189 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260165341011 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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