The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.» Write at least 150 words.

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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
» Write at least 150 words.

Submitted by Sukeerty on Sun, 05/12/2019 - 11:42

The bar graph depicts information about the exports of wheats of three various nations in millions of tonnes between 1985 and 1990.

In an overview, it can be noticed that australia is documented to export lesser quantity of wheat as opposed to other countries over a given period.

As it is apparent from the figure that, the transport of wheat to other places was the highest in canada at around 18 million tonnes in the year 1985, which although reached at its peak level in 1988 at about 25 million tonnes, declined gradually at its initial level in 1990.In case of Europe, the selling of wheat abroad was around 17 million tonnes in the year 1985 increased minimally to about 21 million tonnes and was successful to be recorded as the highest exporting country of wheat in 1990.

As for australia, which was the least exporting country in the initial year at about 15 milliin tonnes dropped gradually to 11 million tonnes in the final year, a decline of around 4 million tonnes in 5 years

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71022727273 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41796580332 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539772727273 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.985527821 43.030603864 346% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.25 112.824112599 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.0 22.9334400587 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118017746874 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888353428586 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307063472263 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888353428586 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307063472263 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.2 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.93 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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