When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, it becomes far more normal for people to concern about the salary when selecting career. While I agree this may suite to many people, I also believe that there are many ones choosing jobs according to others factors.
On the one hand, there a variety reasons why people consider salary as the most crucial factor when choosing profession. First, a high income might ensure a high standard quality of life, which means that people can afford their increasingly demand for not only human basic needs but also some luxury properties such as expensive cars, smart houses or just a overseas vacation. Besides, many people contend that high salary represent for a high working capacity as well as their level in society. In others word, the higher income they receive, the more valuable they are in their prospective employment. Therefore, the salary plays a vital role and becomes the most concern in job selection.
On the other hand, I believe that other conditions also could be taken to make a decision when people consider which career they interest in. Nowadays, workers expect more variety and diversity in their jobs, so the environment working is likely to be the requirement of those people who adore the freedom and outdoor activities. In fact, they cannot experience the feelings of spending 8 hours on sitting in front of the computer screen every single day like a bank officer. They, thus, are likely to choose professions with more challenging and motivate rather than how much money they can earn.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that high salary is the most important factor in job selection. But as far as I am concerned, if these jobs could not meet the demand of workers, any considerations about income would be irrelevant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...as expensive cars, smart houses or just a overseas vacation. Besides, many people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93288590604 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53258570651 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5486842634 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18064366466 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738233165862 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784926684062 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12273626147 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543996133465 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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