The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A majority of people deem that it is harmful to individuals and the society if the attention of the media is on the negative issues and urgent problems rather than positive news. this has resulted in a controversy. In my point of view, I concur with such thought.
To begin with, it cannot be denied that nowadays, mainstream media channels prefer news regards instant issues. this is due to the fact that most of the civilians want to be updated. Events that happened in a day will be quickly updated online or by television every minutes. For example, in 2018, many press and public media have continuously updated news about Prince Harry and Meghan Markle’s wedding each second. it was filmed and was lived on Youtube so that the fan of this couple or other audiences can keep up. However, accompanying with that is unwanted scandals which the main does not want to be involving in.
Secondly, there are some types of media have favor in celebrities’ private life because of these piece of information will attract extra follower for their press or media channel. No problems could be seen if the media did not lead the audience into faulty ideas. For instance, some tabloids even published article in relevant to the marriage of Justin Bieber and Hailey Balwin, but instead of the good news, the media mislead the readers into the story of an unhappy marriage. As a result, one of them had to explain clearly to public although this is not their mistake.
In conclusion, it is unambiguous to see that the instant and constantly updated news provided by media is not always beneficial, but in contrast, those reports sometimes lead to misunderstanding and unwanted problems. it will be such an improvement if the reporters balance the amount of positive and negative information provided to the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92556634304 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73746621238 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6417016166 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153542945599 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476953235942 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761303856576 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110054128816 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706094733016 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.