Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems
Environmental problems are one of the crucial issues that we are going through at the moment. There are certain aspects of the environment, one is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. However, there are more pressing matters regarding the environment that we need to be much more concerned about, like global warming, greenhouse effect and the disappearance of ozone layer from certain areas of the atmosphere.
It is true that due to the aggressive behavior and lifestyle of the humankind, many of the plant and animal species have vanished from earth over centuries. Recently the rate has increased a great deal than before. It is also a fact that varieties of species have a major contribution to our ecosystem and overall well being. Their absence can have a negative impact on the overall balance of the nature, which may lead to different environmental problems. For example, some of the species of tiger have disappeared from earth over the time we existed, and many are in danger of extinction. This can hava a harmful impact on the ecosystem of their neighborhood.
While extinction of particular species of plants and animals are certainly an important issue, this is not as important as other environmental problems which are crucial to our very existence. For quite a long time, our major concern has been the global warming, which has the potential to extinct the whole species of humankind, including many other creatures that live in this world at this moment. Due to global warming, the sea level is rising, ice in the polar region is melting. Researchers have warned that in a very short time a large portion of the earth’s land area will be under the sea, which leaves a little chance to the survival of species that live in the land. Another problem is the desertification. Due to deforestation and other human activities, many regions of the world are turning into infertile deserts. Fossil fuel usage is energy generation is increasing the crabon content of the atmosphere, which is responsible for greenhouse effect. Unless necessary measures are not taken, most of the species that are now alive will not be that way in the near future.
Therefore, our major importance should be in saving the whole world, other than stressing about particular species of plants and animals.
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- Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society 84
- Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free. 50
- The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 67
- Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today. 50
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...nt environmental problems. For example, some of the species of tiger have disappeared from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00515463918 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80083854713 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502577319588 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7735227977 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.888888889 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285098449896 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891499256402 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979035097018 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18126121085 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488753666884 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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