Children under 10 years old are not allowed to used smart phone. Do you agree or disagree?
In our modern society, the question whether children under 10 years old should allowed to use smart phone has been widely discussed. As for me, I totally agree with the idea that children under 10 years old are not allowed to use smart phone because of some significant reasons.
First of all, using smart phone at young age will affect children in their social life. Actually, smart phones are more and more popular, and a child has a smart phone is very normal. The fact that if we look at a modern family, all of members of this family will have at least a smart phone, and I would like to say that is a bad picture after all. It is obvious that young parents less care about their children and ignore them with smart phone, TV or laptop which makes them have bad habits in their live. Instead of playing outdoor activities, these children stay indoors and play with their smart phone. Furthermore, smart phone with useful conveniences will provide children what they want, and they do not need to communicate with others any more. They, for example, can watch cartoon, play game and listen to music as well and only need to play with their phone. As a result, children will be in the habit of playing alone and limit communication with family and friends.
Second of all, I believe that children under 10 years old will neglect their studying if they play the smart phones too much. It is true that a smart phone becomes a standard equipment of students’ life, and they can live without it. The result is students will neglect their study by playing phone not only at home but also in class. Playing game and message in class or while doing homework can distract them and cannot pay any attention to what they are doing, especially with children under 10 years old they always like playing than studying, that is hard to control them.
However, my opponents may argue that children under 10 years old can use smart phone because it can avoid bullying when they play with their friends, it is not really convinced at a closer look. In my view of point, using smart phone will causes children’s physical and mental health problems. It is evident that although technology brings a lot of benefits to people, there are also some disadvantages to them. Children under 10 years old, who are in the beginning of development, are too young to get these bad impacts. Therefore, hey are easier to get problems in their physical health such as obesity and myopia because they spend too much time to concentrate on the smart phone and do not care anything else or go outdoors to play. Moreover, using too much smart phone will cause children’s mental issue. In fact, smart phones include various function that children can find everything they want which contains unexpected things and may harm children, especially under 10 years old children who cannot know whether it is good or not. Consequently, it will lead children get bad behavior if it is bad information and programs. Because of no contact with others, children can make a habit of playing alone and even be autism if they are in a long time.
In conclusion, children under 10 years old are not allowed to use smart phone because using it causes many problems to them in social life, studying and even health. Parents should care much more about their kids, play and chat with them to limit the time and avoid bad effects on them when using smart phone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
In our modern society, the question whether children under 10 years old should allo...
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Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...ldren under 10 years old should allowed to use smart phone has been widely discussed. ...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'standard equipment'.
Suggestion: standard equipment
.... It is true that a smart phone becomes a standard equipment of students' life, and they can li...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...y view of point, using smart phone will causes children's physical and mental hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, well, while, after all, as for, at least, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 7.85571142285 318% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2825.0 1615.20841683 175% => OK
No of words: 605.0 315.596192385 192% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6694214876 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95951083803 4.20363070211 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36283636696 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 176.041082164 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43305785124 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 837.0 506.74238477 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8347077098 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.28 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436907240721 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165459075267 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128906446751 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336958141835 0.151304729494 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122405939863 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.