Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary world, universal tourism has become one of the superior organization worldwide. Some people believe that global touristry create discrepancies among people belonging to different cultures, whereas few people oppose this view. I do not believe tourism creates pressure on people.
To begin with, advancements in technology is overruling all sectors such as tourism in different ways. Firstly, many countries in the world are solely dependent on tourism for their national income using technology without endorsing any cultural laws on tourists. For instance, Dubai, which is considered as one of the developed nations in the world has worst climatic conditions that do not permit them to practice agriculture and moreover, they even lack natural resources to attract foreigners to raise its income through tourism. But the major attraction of tourists to this country is sightseeing, shopping malls, mammoth aquarium&indoor ski slopes
Secondly, tourism creates many opportunities for locals to raise money as tourist guides. Foreigners who visit any country have the civic sense to behave in public, whereas few people behave inappropriately which is common in any country. To elaborate, there may be disturbances among people of the same country. It depends on the person, not all tourists would create tension about cultural differences. For example, foreigners visiting India, love the cultural heritage of India and wrote many books and blogs about it.
To sum up, there might be slight stress when a few tourists behave atrociously, but it would not be a problem. In my view, the influx of tourists has a huge potential to increase the economy of a country by ignoring a few troubles created by them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...gnoring a few troubles created by them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, such as, in my view, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38235294118 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90339706772 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8980475149 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169398822372 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066336414246 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518946284744 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104956871622 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734961847096 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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