letter to friend
To John,
It's been a long time since we met with each other. I'm writing this letter to tell you that about 6 months ago, I had applied to Queen's University for doing my further studies and yesterday, I received a confirmation mail from them that I got admit incoming fall semester.
My course is divided into 4 semesters and the time duration of each semester is 6 months. So, it's 2 years' study. My classes will start on the 20th of September. I have classes on alternate days.
As you already know, the Financial condition of my family is not so good and I am the elder son of the family. Therefore, I will be requiring a part-time job to pay my living expenses and repay my tuition fee.
Once you told me that you are working in a huge store called Wallmart. So, Can you ask form your friends or from your manager, if there is any vacancy for me?
I look forward to hearing from you. Also, pay my regards to your parents on behalf of me.
With Love,
Frank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...long time since we met with each other. Im writing this letter to tell you that ab...
^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'queen'.
Suggestion: Queen
...at about 6 months ago, I had applied to Queens University for doing my further studies...
^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...xpenses and repay my tuition fee. Once you told me that you are working in a h...
^^^^
Line 17, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anager, if there is any vacancy for me? I look forward to hearing from you. Also...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41530054645 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36495257601 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693989071038 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.058268141 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.1538461538 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0637652939057 0.216113520407 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0140006884347 0.0766984524023 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332742932889 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0275467563819 0.12726935374 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337716978002 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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