Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger.
Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?
In today's world, the number of young married has decreased drastically in a modern society. I personally believe that young couples should comprise a family with children when they are older than 30 years old. This essay will discuss both views, using arguments and example from BBC news and Queensland University to demonstrate points and prove arguments
On the one hand, there is ample evidence in enriching and strengthening a family in the developing and developed nations. This is largely because educational academics, economic status and cultural traditions are constantly changing since the advent of the Internet. Young individuals prioritize certain task such as their employment status, educational achievements and living standards as a result of the vast information and knowledge received from the online world. For example, recent empirical research by Queensland University suggested that 20% of young couples aims to set priorities in their life such as afford a car or house and the last goal is to establish a family and have children. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that young families prefer to delay their married status in order to strengthen their financial status and educational records for the sake of social well-being.
On the other hand, although there is a case to be made for delaying the situation of having children and married status, the impact of this trend on the society cannot be overstated. The population growth is an essential requirement for a modern society, countries rely on substantial economic development and without having enough population they cannot guarantee a better living standard for their city-dweller. For example, an article published by BBC News showed China and India support campaigns for young family with children by promoting a job and household in remote areas. Conclusively, it is possible to state beyond doubt that authorities should foster and support a substantial population growth among young families.
To conclude from the arguments and points given I firmly believe that young people should prioritize their personal goals before getting married and having children. In the future, the importance of building a modern society will have more challenges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42693409742 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88362354821 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553008595989 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5986253111 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.692307692 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22715719351 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809203021317 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533562304479 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146203081877 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420784308383 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.