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mother plays a better role in bringing up children rather than father.do you agree or disagree ?

although such topics will never yield a consensual agreement,a dialogue on mother plays a better role in bringing up children rather than father can lead a thought provoking discussions.
my view is that,irrespective of numerous aurgument that exist on either side,mother are more considered in bringing children through the course of this essay i shall explain my point
of view by considering both sides of the argument.

firstly,mothers are more attached with children which is universally proved since they have the bonding from childhood.they care about their kid and they even thinks
about kids future.according to the women ratio some are house wives and many women work for their family nowadays, though, mother works and they take care of their children by communicating.
however,always mother thinks of planning children future.

secondely,fathers are also concerned about their kids but not like the mothers bonding. fathers are trying the best to subsequent the both sides which is their business and the family sides
to be equal.when a daughter is concerned,the point of view is they cant disccuse their personal body problems with father as we find mother is more involved.consequently,fathers are attached with
with their sons,where we find they both can discuss the problem like friends

i see that there is a potential evidence to support the argument i have provided,and hence,my opinion is that i agree,mother plays a better role in bringing up children
i am inclined to belive that mother has better bonding from childhood and more considered about their future.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42231075697 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39753051492 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.5024630542 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.484370134 50.4703680194 403% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 226.833333333 104.977214359 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.8333333333 20.9669160288 200% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.25397266985 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.12807881773 266% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.33497536946 544% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23350151007 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134526146585 0.0925447433944 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120539387862 0.071462118173 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959767765279 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10942818253 0.0609392437508 180% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 12.6369458128 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.9458128079 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.3980295567 177% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments