Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, online shopping has become more popular because the internet connection is accessible everywhere and the advent of handheld devices allows buyers to shop anytime. This type of purchasing has many perks and the disadvantages of using it are few and tolerable. These advantages of purchasing online include convenience and energy-saving. Meanwhile, the internet is also a place of bogus sellers and buyers, and other dishonest transactions.
In the past, before the internet happened, people only sold things in public markets or malls and did home visits to attract buyers, however today there’s a new way to buy items through the use of the internet which is more convenient. Through buying online people can visit different shops without going outside their homes, or while they are engaging in some tasks. Additionally, the payments can be made through debit and credit cards. For instance, when someone purchases a gadget via a website, buyers need only to enter their personal details including the address, credit card details and add to cart the items they want, eventually, after a while, a confirmation will be given that delivery is on its way. Thus shopping online makes life easier with less time invested in the purchasing process.
However, the internet is also a place where some people takes advantage because products are not examined closely, there are bogus buyers, and some transactions are not legal. For example, there are sellers of gadgets who post excellent descriptions of their products on their sites, but upon receipt of the item by the buyer, the product was not the same or an unauthentic item was given. Meanwhile, sellers can sometimes be also victims because of buyers who order but never pays or either cancels their orders. This affects the profit of the business, which might cause bankruptcy or simply discouragement of selling online.
Undoubtedly, there are advantages as well as disadvantages of selling and buying online, but I personally believe that the pros outweigh the cons regarding this issue. Since I believe that the majority of online sellers adhere to regulations in online marketing. With more strict implementation of online selling rules and regulations, bogus sellers and buyers will be penalized accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...perks and the disadvantages of using it are few and tolerable. These advantages of ...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...outweigh the cons regarding this issue. Since I believe that the majority of online s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, regarding, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27671232877 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7787170656 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569863013699 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2030054529 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.375 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19341642505 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594536191851 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631539169371 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120131823645 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589983666925 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.