Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A group of people can bring about a big change only in the guidance of a great leader. The leader is the one which shapes the decision of the group and leads them to success. So, the representative of the group should have some basic qualities to lead the group. There are several leadership skills, but there are some which are necessary and sufficient to become a great leader. One of them is respecting his peers which is necessary to lead and convince his pupils. But the ability of making a sound moral judgement is highly important and absolutely necessary for leadership.
There are times when a group of people become so furious that they decide to take the violent path to express their views, which could have devastating effects. At these crucial moments it is the duty of the leader to come forward and explain his pupils the repercussions of their actions instead of letting them do what they want. A great example of this would be the great leader Mahatma Gandhi who always guided his people towards the path on non-violence and non-cooperation for the fight against the British rule. Gandhi ji was quite successful in his campaign and helped India to gain independence with minimum violence even when some people wanted to opt the violent path. Therefore, a good decision by a leader could help to solve a problem peacefully and thus prevent unnecessary violence. Moreover, a sound moral judgement by a leader could also help to gain his peers' respect and admiration in the long term.
Also, the leader must be able to respect his people and must understand that his power relies in their faith. Taking his people for granted will dissolve the group and their strength too. So, to hold the group together in desperate times the leader must choose to take the side of his people instead of confronting them.
Finally, one could say that the leader must respect his or her peers but the quality of making a sound moral judgement is of utmost importance for his leadership.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 543, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...moral judgement is highly important and absolutely necessary for leadership. There are times when...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, moreover, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76589595376 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51814392272 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488439306358 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8553333132 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.0625 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223047625014 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880556435405 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647704404798 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164554015032 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05803652867 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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