Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent years, the question of whether the meaning behind traditional festivals is losing or not has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although some only want to enjoy themselves during these days, the majority remain the traditions of their countries or religions.
There are several reasons why people believe that festivals are occasions for them to enjoy themselves. First, since citizens are occupied with a substantial volume of work these days, they tend to stay home during festival periods. In fact, national festival days could be days off for people to take a break as they have devoted their time and energy to daily work to get promotions and earn higher salaries, which discourages people to participate in these occasions. Second, with the development of technology, people, particularly youngsters, tend to glue their eyes to screens to get a sense of relaxation. For example, motions and attractive effects performed on Tv will be more appealing to young generations than going outside and sitting in traffic for hours during these days. Therefore, the awareness of the traditions of people may disappear gradually.
Nevertheless, most individuals also tend to enjoy the national cultures beside themselves. In most countries, people still preserved traditions by taking part in traditional festivals. For instance, Tet plays an important role in Vietnamese culture, and customs on this occasion have remained over generations. During Tet periods, the Vietnamese refurbish their houses, pay a visit to relatives and make the best wishes to one another, and children receive red envelopes from older generations. We could also see how Western people celebrate annual Easter days with turkeys together. Therefore, those imply that people still aware of preserving traditions despite the hectic pace of life.
In conclusion, although some people mainly want to enjoy themselves during festivals, others opt to celebrate these days with their families. By understanding the reasons for these celebrations, people could preserve cultures in the modernized world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In recent years, the question of whether the meaning behind traditional festival...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48606811146 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86994065198 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606811145511 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.569336866 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.75 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288578647539 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095196387233 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525597696106 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181488993337 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219198016508 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.