It is better for young to get advice from older people than young people. Do you agree or disagree?
Young people are naive and inexperienced to take rational decisions. In my opinion, youngsters should get suggestions from their elders. In this essay, I will discuss that older people play vitally important role in the lives of children by helping them in taking sensible choices and by providing mental support them, when children are being vulnerable and scared to take firm steps.
To begin with, elderly people have an ocean of experiences from their up and downs in career. This experience assists the young brains to make wise decisions at that point, when they are unfamiliar to this world and fail to see the far reaching consequences. For example, if a child wants to pursue his career in particular field, then his parents are the best guide and provides primary support to him, by offering knowledge about career's advantages and disadvantages. In this way, the wisdom of the adults at last guides the children to thrive in their life with less obstacles.
Secondly, older people may be emotionally stronger than the young generation. This can be proved by the fact, that adults are less involved in prohibited activities. For instance, some criminal reports show that adolescents are likely to be victims of illegal activities and violence whereas the people from the age of 50 to 80 are least involved in illicit activities. Apart from this, due to passion to explore this world, youngsters tend to take irrational steps which are rectified with the guidance and counseling of parents.
To sum up, it can be reiterated that elderly people are more strong individuals with qualities of rational decision making and well versed experience coupled with the knowledge of pros and cons of situation. As a result, children get to know about the problem and risk when they take consultations from their elders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in particular, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06644518272 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69969075097 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0619995253 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.307692308 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207690573595 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830745837269 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797924036455 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127960832444 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453051539209 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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