Some people believe that to give opportunities to the new generation, companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree
Many youths are redundant due to lack of employment opportunities. Solving such problem has never been by encouraging experienced and aged employees to retire, it has always been by creating more jobs, as well as training many young adults.
It is undeniable that old workers who are above 55 years are occupying a reasonable amount of positions in the labour market. But the population of these workers is extremely low while that of unemployed youths is ridiculously high. This means that many youths will still be unemployed even when all old staff are retired. Therefore, I think the aged employees should not be motivated to retire.
Instead, these high-level workers should create more job opportunities by extending products and developing ideas in their organisations. Old consultants in universities, for instance, are inventing new courses. Doing that would create the need for more young employees who would run the operations of such inventions, thereby resulting in creating more jobs.
Even if the above method does not create opportunity for all youths, there may another way to create opportunities for more of them. To do this, young people would need to be equipped with technical and vocational skills when they graduate from school. With such knowledge, there could be more opportunities for them to work as engineers, designers and developers. Perhaps, that is why the government is establishing hardskills training centers, specifically targeting youths
In conclusion it appears that both young and old people can co-exist in labour market if more ideas that could create jobs are developed. For this reason, I disagree that high-level employees who are over 55 should be motivated to retire in order to create opportunities for new generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34163701068 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98176471814 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551601423488 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8227770319 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1792292351 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651518111116 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711550777856 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108472027758 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669485198943 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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