Nowadays, more and more people engage in dangerous activities, such as sky diving and motorcycling. Are you in favour of them? Use examples to support your opinion.
Tourism has spread swiftly as mobility of humans have increased due to better mode of tranportation now. Recently many different kinds of entertainment activites are available and people choose to engage in the activities that they like, which may be dangerous as well. This essay will discuss how these activities have more advantages.
To begin with, almost everybody in their youth wants to have an experience of a life time. For that purpose they opt for different kinds of adventures such as sky diving and motorcycling. These activities help people to overcome the fears they have in life and it is a tremendous boost for their mental health. For instance, according to a survey by Ameircan Psychology Institute, people who challenge their fears perform much better in their life as compared to people who do not . Therefore, these activities help individuals to become mentally tough and being successful in their life.
Secondly, these type of adventure attract a large number of tourists. As a result, it helps in developing tourism industry which brings revenue for the country and lead to economic growth. For example, a large of part of economy of Switzerland depends on the tourism industry. Thus, dangerous activities promotes tourism.
In conclusion, extreme adventure activities is beneficial for mental health and also it boosts tourism in a country. In my opinion, with proper safety measures taken for these extreme sports, these bring the best out of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22175732218 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79180347923 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606694560669 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3867259459 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1428571429 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.25397266985 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12570525495 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458162754115 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452122315744 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728999799329 0.151781067708 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407785924307 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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