Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Sports And Social Activities
Sports and social activities are popular nowadays, they are an important aspect of human life. Many propose that Universities and colleges should fund sports and social activities equally as classes and libraries. In my opinion, I think that sports and social activities are important as classes and libraries, so I agree with the preceding statement. The following essay will address the reasons behind my opinion
To begin with, the psychological state affects a student's studying and performance. sports and social activity change one's mood and make him happier. A happy student will not get the same grades as a depressed student, sadness and depression reduce passion and excitement. Moreover, it's easier for a happy student to memorize or understand something because he is not distracted as his depressed friend. For example, my own experience demonstrates this concept, one day I was studying and feeling depressed and trying to finish my homework,then my friend proposed to go with her to the gym, when I came back I was in a relaxing mood and this helped me to be patient and finish my homework easily.so its easier for a person in a good psychological state to perform better.
In addition to the student who practice sports and social activities appear to be healthier.
sports and social activities develop the human 'brain, besides it develops muscles and memory which produces a healthier individual. An ill student will have a low performance .for instance, last semester I started feeling a tough back pain, which affected my way of sitting so that I was not able to sit for more than half-hour in the class , I start suffering which distracted me and I just slept on my desk, my doctor said that this is due to lack of activities and sport and spending long hours on my computer, he advised practicing sport every day for ten minutes. Sports release nervousness and pain which affect our daily activity.
As a conclusion, I strongly believe that practicing sports and social activities are important as much as class attendance and studying, so absolutely they should be equally funded. Because a healthier body will result in a higher performance, and a happy student will succeed more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04043126685 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84831078373 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533692722372 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.15500615 48.9658058833 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.571428571 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202966059575 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963478755842 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902962658317 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150698817097 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101148219979 0.0645574589148 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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