The consumption of the world’s resources (oil and water, etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate..What are causes and solutions?
This day, in every part of the world, the demand for using energy resources has been growing by vigorous economic countries. The main reason for the extreme consumption is stemmed from papulation, which needs vital elements to satisfy humanity’s demands. From economic and environmental issues, This fact has a vast number of problems. This essay attends to describe the problem and solution for high rating consumptions of these vital resources.
In the first step, it seems that the economy of a few countries is depended on energy sources. Primarily, in the middle east, the principle of trade, export, and import between countries has been based on oil resources. Besides, rich countries, which are considered as primary resources of energy, are to be a modern country in the middle east. However, some political issues impose on this country to export their products at a low level of cost of the international price. Suddenly, the financial situation has increased under the increasing consumption of energy. The best way to solve this kind of problem is that the firm policy of the distinguishing economy of depending on energy is passing by authorizes. In Saudi Arabia, for instance, many investors around the world are invited to Saudi Arabia to invest in big digital marketing in the context of the internet. The statistics have shown that the benefit of this economic cooperation is around 100 Billion dollars per 1 year. So, it is respective to consider other financial resources for increasing the economy.
Additionally, from environmental issues, the use of fossil resources can be dangerous for the ocean and atmosphere. besides, it can be asked that how humankind can fill the gap of energy for the next generation of humanity in the next decades? To address these problems, it should be clear that increasing the population around the world force the government to develop its industry. The way of explanation, the transportation industry needs fossil energy resources to move the Airplane and cars. Furthermore, some nuclear energy should be supported by a massive amount of water resources to cool the facilities. Nevertheless, this setback can be solved by renewable energy resources like wind power of solar energy. The majority of this energy, which is not dangerous for the environment are very cheap to recover quickly. Inconsequent, prominent energy is available everywhere, which should be considered for investing in the developing industry.
In conclusion, humankind’s demands have increased in the last century by increasing the population and dividing countries in two-part as developing countries and developed countries which need to use the prominent power supply of energy. This development has two aspects of the economy and environmental issues. Renewable energy sources must be counted as the main supply for around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... consumptions of these vital resources. In the first step, it seems that the eco...
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...dangerous for the ocean and atmosphere. besides, it can be asked that how humankind can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2422.0 1615.20841683 150% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31140350877 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96505177187 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 764.1 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6099635422 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.916666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161975853717 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469967929224 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427440823243 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962871548331 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231567590814 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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