Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
he importance of sharing information, which has always been debatable, has now become more controversial. While many people claim that data should be accessible freely, others reject this notion. However, in my point of view, the second belief appears to be more rational. Reasons are going to be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, the most rational justification about the first group's sights is that people, all over the world, are undoubtedly expected to be up-to-date in their professions. In fact, it is crucially important for all workers to gain firsthand information freely and making progress in their job. Moreover, supporters of the current opinion argue that considering cost for information may not be affordable for the majority of people. For instance, teachers should explore for new, challenging ways of designing homework, but their incomes are not much enough to procure data regularly.
On the other hand, others put forward the arguments against this belief. The main reason justifying their opinion is that financial supports plays a vital role in some sort of information. As an example, researchers, working in laboratories, must provide ingredients for their experiments, So, their activity profoundly affected by financial issues. Sales of their previous scientific discovery is incredibly essential for them to provide the cost of their current research. Furthermore, there are number of information which not only would be dangerous but also have limitation in users’ age; The best example of this idea is "how to make a bomb".
In a nutshell, although there are numbers of sights on both sides of this controversy, in my firm conviction, information should be divided in to free and monetary based on their fields. As a matter of fact, considering payment to special source of information would put limitation for access, or help them to improve
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- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research business and the academic world Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely Discuss both views and give your 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, while, for instance, in fact, sort of, as a matter of fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96928723209 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616666666667 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7790796038 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160908504479 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539530382146 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235625984777 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960683987772 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207704959037 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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